雅思到底需要怎樣的句型
在筆者教學中,每問及各位烤鴨雅思需要怎樣的句型,答案總是:復雜的句子或長難句。但是觀察學生的習作,尤其是分數(shù)集中在5分左右的學生的作文,我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)句式的銜接過于單一,比如:"in our daily life, we always communicate information through the media, such as television, radio, film, these media have different advantages and disadvantages for us" (劍橋4-text1). 句子的連接逗號漫天飛,不知怎樣的pattern是合適的(你中招了嗎?)。
官方的復雜句要求
為了解決這個問題,我們先來看看官方的抽象要求,即評分標準的描述(以7分為例):
- Use a variety of complex structures
- Produces frequent error-free sentences
- Has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors
綜上:關鍵詞有兩個“a variety of complex structures" and "good control of grammar and punctuation". 那我們繼續(xù)看官方對complex structure更為形象的示例:
- 帶從句的復合句
e.g. Whereas many people accept the need for exams, others are less convinced.
- 復雜的名詞短語
e.g. The most important reason for this problem is lack of resources and infrastructure.
- 簡化的從句
e.g. Finally, budget saved can be allocated to other aspects, such as education.
- 復合動詞
e.g. It is important to be able to use some of the structures listed here.
筆者的復雜句歸類
看到這,烤鴨們是不是有點感覺了,但筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)這是不夠的。為了烤鴨對復雜句更加清楚,達到官方要求的多樣化,先以一句為例,以多種方式表達,方便您模仿和學習。
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency and this has changed this vast world into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency; therefore this vast world has been changed into a small village.
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這兩種方式是以主句的形式連接,易錯點是逗號不能銜接句子 |
When Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, this vast world has been changed into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, which has changed this vast world has been changed into a small village.
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這兩種方式是以從句的形式銜接句子 |
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, thus changing this vast world has been changed into a small village.
Air flight has greatly enhanced travelers' efficiency, with this vast world being changed into a small village. |
這兩種方式是以短語的形式銜接句子 |
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